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Post by ESP on Jul 16, 2020 23:00:43 GMT
X-Division No.1 Contendership!
LMS:
STG:
Voting rules are the same as always.
Voting Ends 23rd July.
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Post by arw on Jul 16, 2020 23:38:05 GMT
Lms: love the springboard. Very creative angle. A bit too quick in air.
Stg: smooth and decent air time. But a bit stiff and some more sell could be used
My vote: lms
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Post by rawstopmotions on Jul 16, 2020 23:49:57 GMT
LMS: Amazing movements. I actually liked the camera change, it was well done! 8/10
STG: A little stiff, and the rope jump needed more. I liked the kick though, minimal, but impactful. 7.5/10
Final vote: LMS
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Post by carltonfan2010 on Jul 17, 2020 9:11:09 GMT
LMS: Very nice and smooth, the joint movement of Bourne was very decent, but I think you should've had him bounce off the top rope more instead of just landing on it, the impact was decent, but I think it would've been better if you picked a different camera angle instead of from Jeff's viewpoint cause its hard to tell what happened with Bourne straight after landing. Jeff's reaction was pretty good too, but I think it could've used him doing something specific to his head being hit like grabbing it or something
STG: Again very nice and smooth, I think it would've been better to use an elite figure ith more articulation cause while you moved the joints consistently, his movement didn't look very lifelike due to the constraints of the figure. I think it would've been better if you had RVD bounce off the mat instead of kinda turn over at the last second out of nowhere. Would've liked some more movement from the victim too, cause the reaction was pretty lacklustre for a big move, also would've liked to see more movement from RVD after landing on the mat too
It's a tough call but I'll vote for LMS for having a better reaction and movement
Vote: LMS
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Post by ESP on Jul 17, 2020 10:21:05 GMT
LMS - really smooth and I love the pre-jump, jump itself Is also good but a bit too fast, creative second angle but I don’t like it since it makes everything hard to see, reaction is alright but a bit choppy - 8
STG - really smooth, great flow, bit stiff since it’s a basic, impact and reaction we’re both pretty minimal, also would’ve liked to see more bounce off the ropes - 7
Vote - LMS
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Post by droopydropp on Jul 17, 2020 15:07:21 GMT
LMS - really smooth, liked that angle you did, good reaction as well 8/10
STG- really good, just thought it was a little stiff and could have had a better reaction 7/10
vote - LMS
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Post by dhink182 on Jul 17, 2020 20:19:51 GMT
LMS - Really good stuff, I like the set up and the lighting. The animation was great, though the one downfall is the weird camera angle change on impact. I think that detracts from it a little bit, but compared to everything else, it's minor. Your joint movement and flow were good and I thought Jeff's reaction was quite appropriate. I also liked that you had Bourne react to hitting the mat as well, instead of just dying there. - 7.5/10
STG - Smooth with a good flow, but I would've liked to see more set up before hand. RVD's taunt would've been a good addition and some playing to the "crowd" would've done a lot. RVD moved about as well as he could with the basic articulation, so I'm not going to fault you for that. For a high-impact move like this, I think your animation lacked a sense of urgency and the reactions could've used more work. I did like your camera set up and I enjoy your arena. Overall, good work, but I don't think this was your best. 6/10
Vote - LMS
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Post by WWExtreme25 on Jul 21, 2020 13:25:41 GMT
LMS: Loved the movements and lighting in this one. Nice take on the final camera angle as it's not often done, but i'm a bit old school and like to see the full shot of the move when its a coast to coast... but thats just personal preference. Very smoothly done, and I liked Jeff's sell at the end but wouldve been cool to see him hold his head from the impact. The impact on which Bourne hit the chair though was nicely done. Good effort. 7.5/10
STG: I thought as a whole it was relatively smooth. I just thought the camera angle was a bit off for me as it was too "Top-Down" and needed to come back a bit. Solid effort considering its a basic figure, but that's always going to hinder your joint movements when competing. Unfortunately RVD looked a bit stiff and floaty when flying through the air because of this. Impact was nice but a bit more of a sell/reaction from Black would've sold the move more. Solid attempt but had a bit more flaws than LMS for me. 7/10
VOTE: LMS
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Post by WZW Animations on Jul 22, 2020 7:27:08 GMT
LMS: The lighting and movements were awesome! The camera change was unique, very old school (like WWExtreme25 mentioned). I would've also like to see the whole move in one angle, also my personal taste. Once again, very smooth!
8/10
STG: The animation was pretty smooth. The camera angle seemed to high. Basic figures are hard to animate with, I give you credit for that. RVD did seem stiff and floaty in mid air. Black sold the move very stiff and awkward.
7.5/10
Final vote: LMS
The deciding factor was the camera height and the sell of the move from LMS. Even though LMS had the camera cuts during the final moments of the move, he still had proper height and more of a decent sell. Well done guys!
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LLI
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Post by LLI on Jul 22, 2020 12:31:32 GMT
LMS:The start was pretty good, it had proper height, but needed more pics while Bourne was in the air and on the reactions, eventhough I liked Jeffs selling
7.5/10
STG: I know how difficult is to animate with basics, I liked the start, eventhough I think RVD could have picked up a bit more height I think for the selling you could of have done more
7/10
Vote:LMS
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