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Post by ESP on Jul 16, 2020 23:01:43 GMT
World Heavyweight No.1 Contendership!
ARW:
STG:
Voting rules are the same as always. Voting Ends 23rd July.
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Post by rawstopmotions on Jul 16, 2020 23:55:26 GMT
ARW: I liked this one a lot. I really liked how u paced it, but the leg bend looked weird to me. 7.5/10 STG: I liked this posing, but it was a little stiff and slow. The impact was a little minimal, but the bounce sell worked really well. 7/10
Final vote: ARW
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Post by lms on Jul 17, 2020 4:33:23 GMT
Arw- Camera angle changes seemed out of place, this this flowed nicely and was smooth, definitely more reaction, especially from morrison
Stg- personally the camera angle was way too close to the figures, kinda takes away the impact of the move, and would've definitely liked to see the ladder fall, like in the clip, cant fault you for not doing it tho, balors reaction was hidden by the ladder
This is tough, very close, but I feel like arw showed off the move better and was more consistent throughout, I've gotta with ARW here, close one, well done to you both
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Post by carltonfan2010 on Jul 17, 2020 9:31:26 GMT
ARW: Super smooth, I though the movement of Morrison was decent, but I think Ricochet's joint movements were pretty simple, I think his impact especially should've made him roll over backwards considering he landed right at his neck. I think Morrison should've been more affected by landing on his feet from such a big height, where he kinda just landed as if it was a smaller jump, or maybe you could've had him land on his knees or something too.
STG: Super smooth as well, I think the movement of Andrade (?) was decent, his landing was more realistic in terms of being hurt by the impact of the move, I like how you had the victim bounce off the ladder, but upon landing on the ringmat I think he should've similarly had more of a reaction, it looked a bit awkward with Andrade's legs and the victims back lining up out of sync, like it would've made more sense for Andrade to land first instead of it to just be like a powerbomb.
Very hard pick, but I think I'll vote for STG as while the mid air movement wasn't as accurate, the impact and reaction was better and more accurate, which is very important for this spot.
Vote: STG
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Post by ESP on Jul 17, 2020 10:25:49 GMT
ARW - pretty smooth, decent flow, Morrison suddenly being horizontal mid air looked a bit odd for me, and when he landed he should’ve had a big knee bend or fall or something like that, good table break, reaction was decent - 7
STG - personally I think the motion of rolling into the flip was realistic and made for a good flow, kinda stiff mid air but was smooth and had a good low throughout, reaction was good, wish the ladder didn’t cover the floor landing but that’s hard to do right - 7.5
Vote - STG
Not an easy choice guys, very tough move and you both did very well!
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Post by droopydropp on Jul 17, 2020 15:13:23 GMT
ARW- very good, thought it was a little stiff in the beginning but it's hard for it not to be a little stiff because he is on a ladder. but still very good 8/10
STG - well done. good reaction, realistic and smooth, the zoom camera angle in the beginning was a bit weird but besides that nice job 9/10
vote STG
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Post by dhink182 on Jul 17, 2020 20:33:19 GMT
ARW - I really liked this one. Your camera work adds to the animation and I enjoyed the initial panning and zooming. I think Morrison's first arm raise could've used a pause in there, but your overall joint movement is very good. That being said, I think Morrison needed more of a bend going into the move then more or less flying off the ladder with little momentum. I liked Ricochet's reaction, I think adding a little more like him grabbing the back of his head or back would've added more to it as well. Overall, I liked it and your smoothness and flow were great. - 7/10
STG - Good work. The multiple camera changes work a lot against you here. They don't give the viewer enough time to take in what they're seeing. Your joint movement looked fine and so did the reactions but I think you would've been better off if you had a bit of a different set up on this one, instead of going with the ladder bridge. I just don't think that gave you enough room to really do something great. - 6.5/10
Vote: ARW
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Post by WWExtreme25 on Jul 21, 2020 13:48:23 GMT
ARW: Not usually a fan of camera pans in animation but I thought you did this very well so good job. The initially jump from Morrison seemed slightly floaty as he came off the ladder. I think it would've been nice to see him bend his knees a bit more as he went back to really show him leaping over the ladder. The mid air movements were really nicely done though! Morrison wasn't perfectly straight in-flight but I thought this added to the realism that you see on TV. And the way he turned back straight towards the canvas added to the impact for when he threw Ricochet through the table. The way you had Ricochet look back as he was moving down was really well done but he was a bit stiff in mid air as falling. Maybe if you moved his arms slightly it would've had more impact on the animation as a whole. The table break was nicely animated but I would've loved to see an oversell of Ricochet roll backwards to show his momentum a bit more coming off the ladder. Liked Morrison's taunt at the end too. Great job. 7.1/10
STG: Really liked the setup on this one. I saw a bit of string however as Andrade flew over the ladder. A bit of a taunt just before the move would've made a nice transition but again, thats just my personal preference. The flow and impact was really nicely done but I thought both figures were a bit stiff in the turn. The way you had Balor bounce off the ladder was really nicely done though, it's just a shame there wasn't more of an oversell showing himself to be really hurt after he hit the canvas. Andrade lying flat out like he broke his back was cool though. 7/10
Honestly really nice match and great attempts from you both. I think I'll have to go with ARW just though, just because I thought he had a bit more going on with his animation, it had an overall really nice flow, and the impact with the camera pan was really nicely done. Slight flaws in both but I just found ARW's to be more enjoyable to watch as your classic 'Sunset flip powerbomb'
Vote: ARW
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Post by WZW Animations on Jul 22, 2020 7:38:34 GMT
ARW: Holy Hell! Very smooth and well done. The camera pans were very smooth and well executed. I though Morrison kinda went over Ricochet too suddenly and no knee movement for the jump. That's the only fault I could find. Very well done! 8/10
STG: Nice set up on this one and very smooth. But, the opening of the animation could've focused on both guys and not just on Andrade. I've seen string during the flip, for a second or two. The impact was nice, but wished you had Finn flip to the front side of the ladder, rather then the other side. Kinda blocks his reaction. 7.5/10
Final Vote ARW
Deciding factor was STG did have a tad of noticeable string during the flip of his sunset flip, as did ARW (but he did try to hide his). Both animations are smooth and on point in quality. But, the deciding moment for me was STG's choice in Finn flipping off to the far side of the ring and hide behind the ladder. This was a tough choice for me to make and I've decided on ARW. Well done to the both of you guys!
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Post by LLI on Jul 22, 2020 12:38:42 GMT
ARW: The pace was really there, super smooth, it flowed really well, I think the selling could have been better from both, but out of that, this was pretty good. 8/10 StG:I think this was kinda stiff, but smooth as well in some parts, the pace wasnt wasnt too good for me, on the flip both figures move weirdly into the left, selling was nice but the impact could have been better 6/10
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