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Post by ESP on Aug 18, 2020 10:55:09 GMT
LMS:
ARW:
Voting Rules are the same as always, read them if you don't know!
Voting ends 21st August.
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Post by ESP on Aug 18, 2020 11:28:49 GMT
LMS - too fast throughout, made some movements look jerky, smooth other than that, rope bounce looked good, reaction could use a little more, not a fan of the Edited black background Or that the green screen only covered part of the frame at times, but still better than seeing string, chokelsam movements looked nice and realistic
ARW - a little choppy, Kane didn’t lift Finn high enough or put enough effort into the actual slam,, reaction needed more, Table break looked decent, flow was okay, background and setup looked cleaner for me
Vote - LMS
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Post by rawstopmotions on Aug 19, 2020 23:07:48 GMT
LMS: Gee whiz man. Bloody insane. Great movement, perfect reactions, chokeslam looked good, it was just a little fast for my liking. However that didn't matter much in the end as everything else looked great. 8/10
ARW: A little bit stiff and slow I think. Also I think the chokeslam looked to much like a push rather than a slam. 7/10
Vote goes to LMS, pretty amazing job to both of you, but LMS, that was really well done
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Post by WZW Animations on Aug 21, 2020 8:51:48 GMT
Oh boy, this is going to be tough...
LMS: The speed was pretty fast and looked sped up, but smooth (minus the tad of jerkiness). The green screened black background does throw my eyes off. The reaction was alright and the chokeslam looked hella nice. 8/10
ARW: Viewing your animation after LMS's played tricks with my eyes, because of the speed difference. The flow was okay throughout the animation. But, it was a bit fidgety and the chokeslam lift wasn't that high. Nice table break is the only positive thing that really stands out. 7.8/10
Vote: LMS
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Post by carltonfan2010 on Aug 21, 2020 16:38:12 GMT
LMS: Very smooth, felt like a coulee parts weren't as smooth in Kane executing the chokeslam, I think maybe you moved the joints too much that the flow looks a bit fidgety, its just super expressive joint movement, I thought the impact could've been better with Punk bouncing off the mat a bit, I also think you could've maybe had Kane taunt or bend down more when chokeslamming
ARW: Pretty smooth, I think it was missing a few frames namely in the mid air part of the chokeslam, the joint movement was alright, but the movement of the figures doing the Chokeslam wasnt as realistic, and it looked more like Kane just threw him instead of chokeslamming him, the impact again was alright but I feel like you also could've benefitted from more and a bounce off the mat
Vote: LMS
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Post by droopydropp on Aug 21, 2020 23:35:52 GMT
LMS- wow. Very smooth nice job. Very creative with have punk pump off the top to Kane. Just nit picking but the only bad thing was the tape on the table. Besides that nice job. 9/10
ARW- Nice job. a little choppy. thought there could have been more of an impact also. But besides that great job. 7/10
vote LMS
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