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Post by arw on Sept 15, 2020 14:00:14 GMT
World no.1 Contender
Droopy vs RAW - Suicide Dive
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Post by arw on Sept 15, 2020 14:41:06 GMT
Droopy- smooth for the most part. I think while running, the legs should get a bit higher, and going through the ropes, i didnt really like how he cliped them with his feet
RAW- Smooth, but i feel the pace difference of the run and dive were a tad too different. I enjoyed the reaction a lot. Going through the ropes, Dolph seemed to go up then back down.
Vote- RAW
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lms
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Post by lms on Sept 15, 2020 16:55:27 GMT
Droopy- animation was really slow and figity, the legs needed to move more, so did the torso and arms. There was literally no reaction to the mive since the video cuts off as he goes through the ropes. Which was also figity
Raw- good joint movement as always, but the run was too slow for the dive, and I think he jumped up too high gor each running stride, since he's gonna have to bend down to go through the ropes, the run should be more about speed then height. Motion through the ropes was nice, but i did feel the reaction was a bit too much this time around, still, very solid animation
My vote- RAW
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Post by G6W Animations on Sept 15, 2020 17:24:30 GMT
Droopy- Was Slow And Frigidity and had no reaction but you tried 4/10
RAW: The First Step Was A Little Weird But The Rest Of The Run Was Fine And The Suicide Dive/Reaction Is Perfect For A Oversell 8/10
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ssw
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Post by ssw on Sept 15, 2020 17:47:08 GMT
Droopy- It needs more pics and probably a higher frame rate. I think you shoulda had a different camera angle tho because we couldn't see the reaction. The running was solid tho. Suicide dive can be tough.
RAW: I feel like he shoulda ran off the ropes because he didnt seem to move fast enough to build momentum. But as always, great joint movement, loved the reaction.
vote-RAW
Great job to you both
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Post by ESP on Sept 16, 2020 0:06:28 GMT
Droopy - one of your best imo, quite slow but I liked the running, jump through the ropes wasn’t bad but was a little fidgety, a reaction is also a very important part of an animation and there was no real attempt here - 4/10
RAW - this is one of the times where your over exaggerated joint movements don’t really work for me, dolph lofted his knees weirdly high and was just too dynamic for the movement he was performing, however, everything after the dive through the ropes was great, impact was a lot like they do in real life and both reactions were great, kinda slow throughout even for me, and some small fidgety parts - 7/10
Vote - RAW
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Post by carltonfan2010 on Sept 18, 2020 11:25:02 GMT
droopydroop: The flow was alright, but it was a bit fidgety in how Ricochet went through the ropes, I think both Ricochet and AJ could've used more joint movement, I would've liked to see you add more of a visible reaction from both guys as it cut super quickly, would've liked to see you try to have Ricochet raise his legs more instead of the drag along the floor, altho it is a hard thing to animate, I also thought you could've had Ricochet take bigger steps and have more of a jump
RAW: Another super smooth one from you, I though the joint movement was a bit over the top at times even though that is just your style of animating, its better to go for super expressive over not expressive at all, but I think you could find a happy medium that is more realistic imo, at the same time though I think you could've had Ziggler have a more accurate jump that showed him propelling himself through the ropes, cause it looks like you missed a couple frames as the camera angle switched, I thought it was a bit too much of a reaction from Ziggler as he landed, I can understand a bounce but I think the super high bounce off the mats outside a wrestling ring wouldn't happen like that, I liked Rick Rude's movement but again I think maybe the part of the reaction where he landed and kicked his feet up looked a little bit awkward, but I liked the parts after that and before it, looked kinda weird with Rude's hands but its such a particular thing that I understand you not thinking to change his hands to closed or open fists
Vote: RAW
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LLI
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Post by LLI on Sept 20, 2020 4:40:16 GMT
Droppy: really weird, couldnt tell what was happening, stiff throughout, no reaction, smooth tho RAW: running was super weird and off, the dive itself was nice as well as the impact, the selling was perfect for me, the overselling how rude tried to hold himself from going backwards was so realistic and unrealistic at the same time. Great job to both of you. Vote: RAW
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