lms
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Post by lms on Jan 14, 2021 17:40:08 GMT
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Post by Wardyz on Jan 15, 2021 1:28:28 GMT
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lms
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Post by lms on Jan 15, 2021 11:08:38 GMT
ARW- smooth overall, but I think k there wasn't any life to the animation and the anticipation for the jump needs some work. As well as the air time, looked pretty floaty, almost like he wasn't acting under the forces of gravity. Reaction needed a bit more I think as well. And the camera angle makes the movements look awkward. Dont be afraid to cut to a new angle, just be mindful of when and where you do so.
Wardyz- sort of choppy throughout the animation with notbreally a consistent flow of movement, not much anticipation or follow through either. I wish you could've tried again, with a more deliberate approach. The camera angle in this one is also awkwardly placed, not helping the animation look more fluid or interesting.
Vote- ARW. Consistency is key
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Post by ESP on Jan 18, 2021 11:12:42 GMT
ARW - Ricochet felt a bit robotic for me, the smoothness was there, but ricochet was quite stiff to start with and stayed that way on his top half for most of the animation, legs were moved well however, ladder break could’ve used a pic or two more, reaction could’ve used a little more also, good flow however - 7/10
Wardyz - quite fidgety throughout, but nice joint movements and a decent flow, as well as a decent reaction, I liked the addition of Cena preparing for the impact, Helms was a bit jumpy on the top rope which looked a little odd, ladder break looked nice however - 7/10
Vote - really tough for me, thought each had things the other lacked, Wardyz was more dynamic but ARW was smoother and flowed a bit better... I think Wardyz just takes it for me.
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Post by G6W Animations on Jan 18, 2021 12:03:16 GMT
ARW:I love the animation I don't actually have a single compliant about it (10/10)
Wardyz:Pretty Good was a bit choppy in the beginning but I love the speed throughout the rest of it (9/10)
My Vote:Arw
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Post by rawstopmotions on Jan 18, 2021 12:57:06 GMT
ARW: Animation was great. It was consistent, and captured the love pretty well. The initial wind up for the jump was off but otherwise good. Personally I like more uniqueness to animations, and somehow the in air movements seemed to basic for my liking. 8/10
Wardyz: Prettu fidgety, but the movements were amazing. I love the sell by both after, but before and during the actual move the speed was a little weird. 7.5/10
Vote goes to ARW just as it had that little more refinement.
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LLI
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Post by LLI on Jan 21, 2021 14:55:32 GMT
ARW: Pretty good animation overall, it flowed really well, i think it was a little stiff in mid air, but when falling the legs moved really good, the ladder break was good too and the selling/reaction was good with ricochet but i didnt like that dean just stayed there. overall really good
8/10
Wardyz: This anim was weird, it had good joint movement but it didnt flowed right, also the trajectory of the guy doing the ssp was really weird as he kinda just went down, didnt continue his normal trajectory, both selling and reaction were great
6/10
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