lms
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Post by lms on Jan 14, 2021 17:46:11 GMT
RAW
ESP
Voting rules: you must rate each animation with a fair and equal critique. Giving a 1/10 rating is optional, but supporting your vote with reasoning is mandatory.
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Post by ESP on Jan 14, 2021 19:51:11 GMT
I’ll post my votes a little later, when’s the voting end date?
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Post by rawstopmotions on Jan 14, 2021 21:39:26 GMT
I’ll post my votes a little later, when’s the voting end date? Yeah and can I also have like a week to vote, I’m away atm and internet connection is scarce here. |
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Post by arw on Jan 14, 2021 23:23:52 GMT
RAW- Super smooth, insane joint usage. Love how rico hops once before hopping over sami. Was a cool detail. Everything was great, except in my opinion the final fall. It looked great, but didn't capture the same feel as the rest of the animation. Felt like a fun exaggerated cartoon. The final sell, as esp said, was kinda stiff. But i think it worked in the place it was.
ESP- Also extremely smooth, and I wouldn't expect different from you. Haha. Running felt off. Kinda like studder stepping. And the way balor got to his feet was a bit odd i think. The sequence flowed really well however, and i liked the arm drag.
Vote - RAW
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lms
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Post by lms on Jan 15, 2021 1:23:36 GMT
I’ll post my votes a little later, when’s the voting end date? Yeah and can I also have like a week to vote, I’m away atm and internet connection is scarce here. We'll give it a week |
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Post by arw on Jan 15, 2021 3:33:36 GMT
So i assume thatd be voting ends january 21st midnight pst
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lms
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Post by lms on Jan 15, 2021 10:48:38 GMT
So i assume thatd be voting ends january 21st midnight pst Indeed |
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lms
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Post by lms on Jan 15, 2021 10:57:22 GMT
RAW- smooth and flowed nicely and as always great joint movements, I do think that the leap frog could've been higher to make it look like he actually jumped over Sami. There were slightly figity bits in the air and the I think if you had done smooth camera pan as they went across the ring it would've been alot better than the cuts you went with because you redid some portions. So, just plan it out a bit better next time.
ESP- smooth as well, but I think the back roll into the monkey flip was too slow and there were too many frames as the chop was being thrown, with too many frames, you lose all the impact. I think that things like that show throughout the animation, as well as things not really slowing down or speeding up at all. Even for the falls. That said, this one also flowed well together, which was the key thing to this animation.
Vote- RAW. Those joint movements are second to none, but, you need to try and work to get rid of that figutyness at times and just the planning out. Esp, what made you come up short in this one was the timing and spacing of the frames. Good job to you both, and it was cool to see the different directions you took to the same sequence.
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