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Post by steaktheguy on Apr 7, 2022 0:54:02 GMT
World Title Tournament Semifinal - Match #1
Stipulation - Animate a Scissors Kick
ENW -
graysonwallereffect -
LLI -
RAW - No Submission
Voting ends at the end of the day on April 10, 2022
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Post by rawstopmotions on Apr 9, 2022 3:20:15 GMT
Firstly, apologies for not submitting anything.
ENW: Frame rate was pretty low. There were only 13 frames in the move, which made it a bit hard to make clear what the precise movements were, to me it looked more like a leg drop. In future I think slowly trying to increase the framerate, and being more minute on the movements in between frames could really improve the animation. 3/10
graysonwallereffect: The movements were pretty stiff, and the running was slow. It really didn't have much movement or life. However, the actual impact was very good. Maybe this was due to the contrast in speed from the first half of the animation, however it did improve the animation. Again, it didn't really look like a scissor kick. 3.5/10
LLI: In terms of speed, this was my favourite. A run up or wind up would have improved the animation, but in my opinion, out of the three it looked the most like a scissor kick. Points of improvement would be adding a run up, and maybe a less stiffness without it being too fidgety. 5/10
Vote goes to LLI. To me it looked the most accurate to the move itself. Well done to everyone!
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Post by steaktheguy on Apr 9, 2022 16:21:52 GMT
ENW - Smaller movements would give this animation more flow, and there also wasn't much build-up to the move. It looked more like a fameasser than a scissors kick. I think there also could've been more of a reaction.
graysonwallereffect - Really stiff and slow movement, in this case I think it could be sped up to make the speed more realistic. I also think you could've had more joint movement to get rid of the stiffness. The scissors kick movement looked a bit weird, but the speed was much better. Impact and reaction were the best part of this one, although I do still think there could've been more of a reaction.
LLI - A bit abrupt on the jump, I think there could've been more build up to the move. Speed is decent, maybe it could've been sped up a tiny bit. The scissors kick movement was kind of awkward but it was the best one here, and the impact and reaction were pretty good.
I vote for LLI!
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lms
Part Timer
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Post by lms on Apr 12, 2022 13:32:21 GMT
Enw- there weren't many frames in this animation, and the pictures that were taken were pretty low quality. Noticed that you screen recorded the animation as well, which isn't necessary at all and hurts the presentation of your animation. As far as the actual movement itself, it looked more like a leg drop to me than a scissor kick. You need more frames,to keep the camera still, and lots of practice. Thanks for participating.
Aen- while you took alot of pictures, there isn't much motion at all, the footsteps were way too close together, looked like he was waddling. You also need more wind up on the jump to sell the movement. And again, this looked more like he just fell on his opponent than a scissor kick. Thank you for participating.
LLI- you had the most movement of the 3, but still lacked alot of life and weight. Needed more wind up and follow through for the jump and more focus on the mid air part of the scissor kick. You also need to work on your timing and spacing to get that rhythm of movement. Thank you for participating.
My vote goes to LLI. LLI simply had the most stop motion looking video this time around. Hope you all do better next time, use your critiques to improve.
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enw
Jobber
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Post by enw on Apr 24, 2022 6:57:22 GMT
[quote author=" lms" Noticed that you screen recorded the animation as well, which isn't necessary at all[/quote] Actually is necessary because when I tried exporting the video it didn't work and then I forgot to crop the video. |
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